Tuesday, March 16, 2010

A new day



Sitting by the window,
I stared, with my mouth ajar,
At the sky so dark
and the night so calm.
I looked down at the sleeping souls,
Perhaps dreaming about the love of their life
With their eyes shut tight
But minds on fire.
Tomorrow will be yet another day,
Like it was yesterday,
Special for some,
But devastating for others
Ofcourse, the irony here is
Like every other day
It too shall passé
                                - Chanz
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34 comments:

  1. vandyMarch 16, 2010 at 3:26 AM

    yeah,,,nothing lasts forever

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  2. Saurabh PanshikarMarch 16, 2010 at 3:32 AM

    Nice and simple... I'm not into poetry much, but I like this one...

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  3. annumMarch 16, 2010 at 4:02 AM

    Nice...but I find the girl's white dress even nicer ;)

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  4. Nalini HebbarMarch 16, 2010 at 4:26 AM

    Nice...a feeling of detachment from today....sad sad poem

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  5. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 5:39 AM

    @ Saurabh : mee too.. I couldnt have done better anyways... :P

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  6. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 5:39 AM

    @ Vandy : Yeah .. :)

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  7. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 5:41 AM

    @ annum : Lol.. Frankly, I had mentioned the white dress earlier in the poem but I had deleted those lines since I couldnt get a pic to suit that.. but by the time I got this pic, I had already made changes... :(

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  8. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 5:42 AM

    @ nalini : Obviously, you know better... I am an amateur

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  9. TomzMarch 16, 2010 at 6:10 AM

    a universal truth, u said there..nice to read..

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  10. SakshiMarch 16, 2010 at 6:11 AM

    yeah nothing is constant but change...

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  11. AtulMarch 16, 2010 at 6:56 AM

    ... i always thought "this too shall pass" lekin ab nahi!! ab se "this too shall passe" ... sounds panjabi! like paappe! wagareh wagareh! :) and i am loving it! (thatz b'coz i am hungry na!)

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  12. Golden VultureMarch 16, 2010 at 8:38 AM

    nice one yaar .. toched heart :)

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  13. RashmiMarch 16, 2010 at 10:43 AM

    WAAH very nice girl...
    My current state of mind this is :|

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  14. garima82March 16, 2010 at 7:09 PM

    Simple yet very strong in conveying the message...

    Good one!!!

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  15. MehakMarch 16, 2010 at 8:17 PM

    wow, this is great! i love the line: 'with their eyes shut tight, but minds on fire..'

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  16. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 9:03 PM

    @ Tomz : Yeah, I know...

    Thanks for dropping by... :)

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  17. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 9:04 PM

    @ Sakshi : Absolutely.. But you have to agree that if there wouldnt have been any change, our lives wouldnt have been exciting at all..

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  18. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 9:06 PM

    @ Atul : Well, actually, passe is generally used for past tense.. as in something which has already passed or in other ways outdated.. I spent half an hour searching the net to find whether it could be used for future.. and whoa I wrote it.. :P

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  19. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 9:07 PM

    @ Golden Vulture : thanks :)

    @ Garima : Thanks girl.. :)

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  20. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 9:08 PM

    @ Mehak : Oh really..?? I am glad you liked it.. :)

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  21. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 9:08 PM

    @ Rashmi : lol.. Let it passe.. :P

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  22. NipunMarch 16, 2010 at 9:39 PM

    Wow chanz!!
    Awesome piece..:)
    It realy is the reality that everything i the world is relative.
    Einstein Rocks..

    Cheers

    Nuts

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  23. ChanzMarch 16, 2010 at 9:41 PM

    Aile.. mera credit Einstein ko de diya.. :x

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  24. supriyaMarch 17, 2010 at 12:59 AM

    wonderful post chanz..! i specially loved the last line..!!

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  25. ChanzMarch 17, 2010 at 2:56 AM

    @ Supriya : Heeeeeeee... thanks girl.. :)

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  26. Tavish ChadhaMarch 17, 2010 at 4:02 AM

    That was a nice and beautiful poem Canz... but yes try not to make every today yet another day... try and have something different everyday :)

    Cheers!
    Tavish
    Blog Link: Sensible Bakwas

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  27. NipunMarch 17, 2010 at 7:05 AM

    He created Physics and u gave us the great literature...:)

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  28. @easeMarch 17, 2010 at 10:29 PM

    for a change, it was neatly done.

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  29. ChanzMarch 18, 2010 at 12:34 AM

    @ Tavish : The best thing to do is to let it come and then to let it go on its own.. Sometimes it is good to be a spectator too..

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  30. ChanzMarch 18, 2010 at 12:35 AM

    @ Nipun... : OMG... I cant believe this.. U know what, I'll hire you as a personal secretary.. saari marketing tu hi karna.. :P

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  31. ChanzMarch 18, 2010 at 12:36 AM

    @ @ease: Oh really..?? Finally you liked what I write.. and when a compliment comes from u, I should know that the result has to be good..

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  32. ChanzMarch 18, 2010 at 2:02 AM

    thanks honey.. :)

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  33. chitzMarch 18, 2010 at 2:02 AM

    no day is same as the odar..bt thn also life goes on..

    good work chanz!!

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  34. NipunMarch 18, 2010 at 10:44 AM

    hehehehehehehehe!!!

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