Wednesday, October 28, 2009

I saw you today




I saw you today
Standing behind the counter at the cafe
That square face
Those drunken eyes
That neat hairstyle
Those wide lips
I saw you today
You turned
And smiled at me
"What can I get you ma'am?", you asked.
I could say nothing
'Coz I saw that same square face
that same neat hairstyle
those same drunken eyes 
those same wide lips
Only it wasn't you.

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8 comments:

  1. @easeOctober 28, 2009 at 8:39 AM

    ahaa..!!
    chakkar kya hai boss..??

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  2. RashmiOctober 28, 2009 at 9:33 AM

    Simple n subtle yet very intense...liked it a lot :)
    Cheers girl!

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  3. ChanzOctober 28, 2009 at 10:30 AM

    @ @ease: dont u worry... i aint going after any guy... :P


    @ rashmi: thanks sweety... :)

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  4. chitzOctober 28, 2009 at 12:22 PM

    short,crisp and good..

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  5. buckingfastardOctober 29, 2009 at 5:16 AM

    nicee...was kind of poetic 55 fiction!!

    well xpressed!! :)

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  6. Dankest CartoonOctober 29, 2009 at 8:23 AM

    well...said!!
    :)

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  7. ChanzOctober 29, 2009 at 9:15 AM

    thanks guys... I wasnt sure of this wud come out good. havent written anything so short.. But now I have regained my confidence.. thanks for reading ma blog...

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  8. PuniaOctober 30, 2009 at 1:47 AM

    Mankhiyaa flyin over d gutter......
    Flutterrr...Flutterr..Flutterr...Flutter...Flutterr....Flutterr

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